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The enemy
Her outer look is fooling her
Her eyes are sore now, her skin is pale
Her bones are weak
she is trying her best yet She cannot see it
Her image in the mirror became her enemy
Everything in her life turned into a puzzle
Its too late solve the puzzle
She is out of breath
She is no longer patient
the lust has found a way to linger Her own shadows
She is laughing ,but When did the tears get in her eyes ?
When did Her cheeks get this thin ?
She is fighting , beating herself
Yet she cannot feel any progress
She is starving for attention
Trying her hardest not to get hurt
Acting tough even though it won't last
She is never satisfied
The tempest in her heart kept on growing
until there is no going back
She is no longer herself, Just a pathetic girl
And here Iam wondering ,how did she become ME ?
By the way, My English is not great , So sorry if I had any mistakes
Its my FIRST TRY
I don't know if this can be called poetry
I didnt study English professionally anyway lol
be easy on me please >__<' .
Its my FIRST TRY
I don't know if this can be called poetry
I didnt study English professionally anyway lol
be easy on me please >__<' .
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I wish my first try was anything as good as this. :/ Maha'a Allah! :3
You're good at this!
If you're feeling so bummed about whatever you're going through, just note me!
You're good at this!
If you're feeling so bummed about whatever you're going through, just note me!